She has gone down with the light
into deepest water
where frozen the eyes denied
see murkily through specter
she has gone down because you deemed her
unforgiven
and all your entreaties and kindnesses
were sunken lies
all the time you waited
like the brown recluse
sits watchful
beneath porch steps
for the unwise
she has gone down because you needed her capsize
to stick the thorn deep and watch her bleed
for those who dare to live inspite of you must pay the price
we are nothing if not accurate
in our thread and release
the arrow
a light airy sound
blistering cloud
cutting through
pierces its mark
and she must sink beneath the waves of your wrath
to ensure justice in an unjust world
that is your closure
as you put away
the disturbance of her
and feel relief
to rid yourself of your reflection
echoing back through the trees
“to ensure justice in an unjust world”
Harsh, but true.
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Thank you so much!
I agree 🙂 (thank you)
This resonates. Beautifully expressed.
You hit the blunt honesty of the harsh reality with this line:
to ensure justice in an unjust world.
You sure know how to really punch us readers in the face for us to wake up. Love it.
Tes yeux sont comme ton Blog…D’une profondeur sans fond !
Je t’embrasse
Tony de France
You’re welcome Candy
So honest and powerful
Ooooh, ouch!!! 🙂 ❤
The last 6 lines say it all…and I can relate
That hurts !
Deeply reflective
It does?
Thank you so much Jodine! xo
Really? 😉
I try 🙂
My enigmatic dear friend xo
Thank you dear D.
Thank you so much em♡
Thank you so much.
Your words always pack a powerful punch! And I’m sure this one was warranted! So woe be to the one it’s aimed at who will hopefully think twice about her egregious words and/or behavior!
🙂 ❤
It wasn’t aimed at anyone really, more of a consideration of how others treat one another and why. I suppose a consideration of behavior more than anything. xo
Oh I see! It’s just hard to believe that people can be that unkind! It actually borders on cruelty! Hope all is well with you!😊❤️
Ah my friend how right you are. I don’t think everyone is like that, and I do think those who are, may be through no fault of ours, but their own agenda and something we do or do not do, that ‘triggers’ them. For so often I see this is the case, that someone is seething and if you are in the way you’ll get an eye-full. If we realize we are such a little part of someone’s cruelty it can take a bit of the sting away I hope! xo BIG HUG my friend!
Yeppers happy people don’t hurt other people! And anger always comes from a place of hurt! How wise you are missy! 😘
Well to be fair to aforementioned hurtful people, whilst I know they were very unhappy I too have been very unhappy and yet did not hurt others, mostly because I knew what it felt like and also had no desire to hurt someone for the pain I felt, if anything I would turn it on myself, which is perhaps the other way people deal and it is no better as you can literally destroy yourself. That said, better yourself than someone else. Ultimately totally agree w/u that if you are content/peaceful within you will not hurt others, but even those who are in pain do not have to.
You are so very right! Because with all the pain physical pain I deal with I could be a real bitch if I chose to. But like you I choose not to do that! Love you❣️😘
Exactly! And you’re the total opposite and that’s a choice and a personality and one of many reasons you’re so beloved♡
Just the thought of what it must be like – not personal 🙂 It’s how I experienced the reading of it, if that makes sense.
Yes and i really appreciate the insight you always help me♡
Oh, that’s good, ‘cos I sometimes think it must come out as just random nonsense 🙂
Not to me. I get it. I like your brand of thinking xx
Btw you seen “Deep Water” an Ozzie show set in Bondai, Sydney. ?
No, I haven’t. I take it, it’s good
Lol – that’s good !
Apropos for my lightworker friend ♡
Definitely worthy
My queen friend in a land of just princesses
(I love that)
I thought about a unique response for you 😇