Use your long words
describe the smell of memory
antiseptic
there in your transparent igloo
born to incubate
smoke before it’s legal on your mother’s habit
bequeath me the tendency
to live without need
from pockets we pull
the nurture the seed
sprouting in defiance
when everything else died of frost bite
against the ire of a late Winter storm
gusting itself into white rage
through the glass you see
yourself being re-made
in the eyes of old women whose wrinkles
make a universal puzzle
and the swell of hills
cast over with violet
a heaven of sorts in setting light
glazing countertops
for foot prints of unseen beast
leading off into nearby copse
could we will ourselves
another go around?
stepping backward into
infancy, chewing the umbilical
surrounded by potential like
a wet firework strains to explode
would it be any different?
your hands, molding my shape
DNA
the type of pasta eaten
over Lake Como the day
of conception
holy was the love that bore the wish
lost in steepled weather vein
glistening against straining light
a mockery of control
just out of reach
there she is
eighty years from now and
just re-born
in unfurled leaves and first sprouting
green a forbidden thing
among the white ushers and
dark flitting ponderable
marveling we can be conscious
of ourselves and of nothing more
than a stream aching to unfreeze
creep closer to living
inch by inch
two warm bodies without a thing between them
aside the shame of knowing
we live both futile and richly
worming our way into the meat
and tender bruise of absolving
those things we believe we need
A truth to your poetry rings inspiration and a touch of hope in our poetic souls.
Love these lines:
“through the glass you see
yourself being re-made
in the eyes of old women whose wrinkles
make a universal puzzle
and the swell of hills
cast over with violet”
The pictures I see cast a surreal vivid imagery of us being re-made
in the eyes of the ancient spiritual woman of strength.
The universe herself shares her love for us humans to peacefully
without hate just love. The answer to our balance is love.
Sis, you’ve nailed this poem. Another one of my favorite poems by you. 🙂
Many surreal metaphors here. Had to read it a few times. Almost feels like I’m reading a Greek myth.
Walking back and forth reading this marvelous piece of art with the moonlight on my face. You are just phenomenal
your words are definitely chewable.
I need some caffeine to fuel the chew. Oldepunk has that affect on me too 🙂
Hope you’re well?
Stunning
You’re back! !
Good 🙂
Marvelous penned lines with such an apt picture. Loved these deep words.
I’m so happy you’re back! I missed you & your writing (even for a short time). ❤
Exceptional 🙂
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Beautiful beautiful girl thank you! You rock! Was reading your gorgeous words this AM – you endow poetry with every poem you write my friend
Thank You Ever So Much 🙂 I Love that! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Beautiful and lovely Dorinda thank you so much my friend I love seeing you on FB also! xo
wow thank you dearly!
😉 !
Thank you lovely Derrick
Yes! So happy to call you my friend! 🙂
I am. I hope you are lovely girl. Sending you a big hug and a cup of joe!
ha ha ha! That’s great! Thank you! I appreciate your reading!
An official ‘ditto’ my friend. You encourage all of us and I hope you know we feel the same way in return xo
You are so worth it and welcome lovely girl xo hugs
❤ ❤ ❤
My favorite night owl
Welcome
haha I just finished it, just what I needed, thank you!
Did you travel?
Like so many others, I’m delighted you are back!!! Though I have not there talent nor gift for words, let me just say that I missed you terribly and love you much. 🙂 ❤
I missed you terribly also my friend I was up in New England – big hugs
I hope you had a lovely time even if you didn’t get to Maine❌⭕🌹
Awesome 💚
Thank you so much dear Anita!
Well … truth be told I did not but I wasn’t necessarily thinking I would – it’s a mixed bag I guess but I felt I ‘did the right thing’ which counts for a lot when dealing with parents.
Good for you! Doing the right thing is always the best choice❣😘
Agreed. Yet the higher road is often very difficult. But you are right. I tell myself that often. Between gritted teeth! 😉
So do I my friend! So do I❣😘