You are the wonder of the world
a red man come from desert
you saved this girl from drowning in sand
pricked her lips with cacti juice
told her of the stars in your mouth
collapsing mountains
summoning sleeping giants to lie beneath us.
With cicadas, you wove me a blanket of safety
though you had nothing
you gave me all.
From the empty handed
comes the greatest gift
unfolding like paper water lillies
leaving stigmatas in my palm
the shape of echoing stars.
Never apologize
Dearest
for being poor or empty handed
when your feathers are full and sunset lifts you high
the circumference of your heart
longer than a sincere word
taught me humility
and how to know
the tenderness of kindness comes often
from those who receive no thanks
for they are not rich
nor need those things to sustain their souls
walking with angels.
You are a man of your ancestors
truth in the words
as the bell chimed, you took me to be yours
pouring salvation into candles
lighting my way to freedom.
So many years I had been caught by the neck
twisting in the wind unable to escape
the trap of circumstance
and in one pull
you gathered me close and saved me
a hunter turned tender
for the fluttering of his people
bestowing goodness like late harvest.
From the empty handed
comes the greatest gift
before we reach heaven
we may have still
walked with angels.
Indeed, we may. So beautifully done to tell of such beauty.
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TheFeatheredSleep puts a story of rescue and beauty on the page.
Oh my goodness this is awesome and incredibly beautiful. You have out done yourself sister marvelous piece
The angels are amongst us – and you, my FFF, are one of them 🙂
This reads like it begged to be written. It’s a beautiful piece with a resonance to it that is much like some of your older work. I love these lines:
“unable to escape
the trap of circumstance
and in one pull
you gathered me close and saved me
a hunter turned tender
for the fluttering of his people
bestowing goodness like late harvest.
From the empty handed
comes the greatest gift
before we reach heaven
we may have still
walked with angels.”
A bit upbeat too, hopeful. That, by itself, is beautiful.
Pure brilliance and magic!!! You have set yourself on fire and in the flames, you are burning brighter than ever!!! Je t’aime, N 🙂 ❤ xoxoxoxoxoxo
This is one of the most beautiful poems I’ve read in a long, long time, Candice. I love it!
Breathtakingly-evocative….hauntingly beautiful…what a soulful gift you have…thanks for sharing! 🙂
What a stunning, haunting, ballad, Candice
This poem gave me the chills. I am sending it to my Beloved, for it perfectly captures our relationship too. . 🙂 Thank you, Candice
The picture you paint of this bright soul is so tender and touching, like those drops of cactus juice in the desert. Lovely!
I don’t know how you do it, Candice, but beauty flows from your pen just like those drops of cactus juice in the desert! Absolutely beautiful!!
This is wonderful!
This made me smile. Your poems always remind me of a pure kind of love that doesn’t need to be answered in any concrete way. It makes me feel like someone else gets it.
What a lovely compliment. It would be my only desire to make someone else feel they’re not alone in how they feel. Thank you so very much 💓
Every time I come back to writing your stuff inspires me to step up my game. So thank you!
Thanks so very much dearest one 💓💓💓
Thanks so very much dear Jane 💓💓💓
You are so appreciated beautiful light girl
Thanks so very much 💓
I love you 💓
I love you N.
It’s a very special poem.
💓
Love this poem & your heart so much! ❤
Don't have the proper words to do this justice… your words touch my heart & soul in a way that not many things do, like looking at the most breathtaking sunset or a new born baby, I just stand in awe of something too beautiful for words.
And I you!!! 🙂 ❤ xoxoxoxox
Love you back ❤️💕
MUAH❤️❤️❤️xoxoxo
I needed to know that somebody loves me tonight❣️😘
You write beautifully!
Hauntingly beautiful!
Candice – the poet reaches the soul of life, and gives color to something others only glimpse in shadows …
💓
Well I love you every night
😊❤️