At every juncture
The challenges are
Equal
For a five year old
First learning to fit in
Can be as painful as
A ninety year olds last breath
When we inhabit that moment
In the skin of then
We are incomparable
For one shall survive a flood
And another the passing of their favorite dog
A child may cry at a bad grade
Whilst her mother learns she must lose her breast
There are few compasses
In the search for meaning
We are not
Linear beings
Very nice!
This is beautiful!🌸
Impressive always
It is not a world of straight lines and right angles,
Not one of orderly grids of numbered and named streets.
No, it is all wiggly and squiggly,
A forest of barely marked trails,
A trackless savanna or desert.
Or unmarked field of fresh snow,
Or canyon lands leading to unknown outlets,
Or mountain cliffs with no other climber’s pitons left.
We humans are what we have ever been,
Explorers where the maps say,
Here there be dragons and Eldorado.
That you titled it “Equal” says it all.
“We are incomparable
For one shall survive a flood
And another the passing of their favorite dog
A child may cry at a bad grade
Whilst her mother learns she must lose her breast
There are few compasses
In the search for meaning
We are not
Linear beings”
The last 3 lines make the poem even more powerful.
I could not agree more.
always beautifully expressed!
I got goosebumps. Beautiful.
Very moving. 👧
I would echo what trE said about those last three lines. Another wonderful poem, Candice.💖
An excellent philosophy
So true – we each experience our own moments, vivid and eternal
You’re touching on the most important truth to life…
Thank you!
Thank YOU my friend
Thank you so much dear Ashley
LOVE IT!
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much Bill
I’m not the one who found the words to express this truth! 😉
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But I so appreciate you reading them
😀
Thank you!