You used to cover your mouth and blush
At my ability to be frank and scathingly honest
It was not a quality and you were not an admirer
Yours was the shamefacedness I didn’t feel
Whilst you, were a well of loneliness
A secret not to be discovered.
When did I become
A crass innuendo girl?
The kind I’d be ashamed of
Was it the first time you turned away?
Or removed my seeking hand?
Or the fiftieth?
So different and so hard to be understood.
I can feel the isolation in this, the loneliness, the pain… especially these lines:
“When did I become
A crass innuendo girl?
The kind I’d be ashamed of
Was it the first time you turned away?
Or removed my seeking hand?
Or the fiftieth?”
Can we measure pain,
That of one frank
And scathingly honest,
And rejected,
Or of the one who cannot express such,
Cannot be with it?
Double tragedy.
Reblogged this on cabbagesandkings524 and commented:
TheFeatheredSleep – communication, communion thwarted
This really speaks deeply
Reblogged this on crjen1958 and commented:
Truth always hurts…
Can we feel the pain of those unknown to us,
deep where truth lies..
Envy, your number grow honestly, where as the pain un-seen by other, to we all recieve,
fair treatment…
i would answers no!
I so love the depth of this…very well done!
We never see it coming, it just ends up there, and we wonder how we came to be this way, a like a cup that overflowing its brim by a distracted waiter
Another powerful one, Candice, with such poignant last lines. ❤️
Your reflection, true or not, resonates within me. Hugs.
It’s so painful to be criticised for saying it how it is
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So well said
Exactly
💓 thank you dear Chris
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Love your replies! 💓💓💓
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Hello, dear heart. ❤
I hope so. I love your poetry.
Awww you made me grin from ear to ear!
You really honor me, my friend ( and you are)
Mission accomplished. *nods*
ALWAYS
Say may I ask a question;
Where does the feather sleep tonight?
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You’re kindedly welcome…
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