Brag of nothing but the day uncertainty will end
Lurching against time, we sway unsteadily in impatient thick air
Cleave to me, together we are captured amber beneath magnetite
When her mouth opens, my fingers twitch by my side to devour
her breath is anise and flowers, her skirts are thick and unyielding
she opens like a late blossom, sheltered from bad weather, will surely
be most radiant
The woman in the photo = a gem… as well as the following lines:
“she opens like a late blossom, sheltered from bad weather, will surely
be most radiant”
Passion-packed and intimately intense.
Simply beautiful! I could read this over and over!
Yes, “passion packed” as someone commented!
I agree with the above comments, but it’s a quiet passion, intimate and somehow restrained.
Intoxicating!
Reblogged this on cabbagesandkings524 and commented:
TheFeatheredSleep – an opening blossom
my favorite words were yr first
“Brag of nothing but the day uncertainty will end”
I envy you for giving birth to this line.. that could take off to anywhere. bravo, g.r.
This sucked the air from my lungs. Stunning π
Yes, my favourite too!
So, so rich. This captured me….totally.
Your words enraptured me, such an underlying sense of intimacy and desire.
So fucking amazing
It’s like a privileged peek into a private world π
Absolutely beautiful.
Splendidly beautiful and erotic!!! π β€ xoxoxoxoxo
What an opening! Small and perfectly formed breathtaking eroticism
This was simply beautiful π
π thank you my friend ivor
Thank you dear bill π
Thank you dearest Maggie
Thanks so very much πππ
Thank you dear bob
I so much enjoy your work. Love it every time you post. Please, please keep doing what you do!!
Thanks so very much π
You are kindly welcome π β€
Thank you dearest Derrick
Ditto my friend!
ππ!!