At first the road seemed seemed impassable
Such a long distance with no sighted end
90 pounds was
A hollow eyed effigy, struggling not to drown
100 pounds was
A sickened mouth, forcing itself to swallow and chew
110 pounds was
A hunger to gain lost appetite, swill of food laying heavy with each urged step
120 pounds growing muscle
Punching the fuck out of weakness and despair
125 the goal, she fought, her joints bloody and plastered together
When she arrived, her body, her mind, her vibrating soul, she stood and cried
At the distance she’d travelled, cracked knuckles captured in dried clay
Stretching like bad memories, bleached by unrelenting sun
In spite of this, still, a flower is able to bloom
Most say, that for some, it is when they are at their weakest, that the fight begins:
“Punching the fuck out of weakness and despair
125 the goal, she fought, her joints bloody and plastered together
When she arrived, her body, her mind, her vibrating soul, she stood and cried
At the distance she’d travelled, cracked knuckles captured in dried clay
Stretching like bad memories, bleached by unrelenting sun
In spite of this, still, a flower is able to bloom”
You found your strength–it’s been there all along.
A stunning analogy captured in the power and resilience in a determined flower. Just gorgeous!
On a long journey of recovery,
Making a road of a sheer cliff.
She persisted despite the illness,
And achieved the goal, stronger.
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TheFeatheredSleep – Endurance, Persistence, Blooming
My heart is in my throat… such an evocative piece. So special. Well done!
You keep blooming beautiful
I am always praying for you
Nice poem
💓 you helped a lot
You did it. You’re doing it. I’m just cheering you on. ❤ *nods*
Lovely!
You done did it, girl! And blooming well 🙂
Superb analogy with final optimism
So many beautiful lines to read.
Wow!
Triumph! ❤️💕❤️💕❤️
❤ xo
Deep Hugs….. muscle huh? I challenge you to an arm wrestling contest sis … 🙂 much love