My latest experiment into prose poetry, for Hijacked Amygdala.
(A PROSE INTO POETRY EXPERIMENT)
strangest statement;
think the world of you
too good to be true
really needed to hear that
reeling for months now
suffocating on mortality emotions
lost that courageous love for life I think I once had
half in and half out
then you came and you were
fantasy figure
intoxicating and unreal
feel like all her light is pulling me out of this darkness and I’m having hope again
wait? You’re having hope again?
that was the thing I had lost
funny how you really can’t go on without hope
but it is so damn fragile
you know how when you are young you feel like something good is going to happen it’s just around the corner? And then sometimes (not always) as you get older you feel like the corner gets longer and longer?
I always believed we makeour own fortune, our own…
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This style suits you, girl! xxxx
I really like how this hangs together – it’s almost conversational. Some fine soul searching to make the reader think.
You are always welcome and I do admire (and appreciate) your writing. Sadly I never seem to find enough time to always leave my thoughts. My best to you.
Chris, I really appreciate that. I really do. Seems WP is a little quieter these days and when one of the Originals comes out and says something about my writing, I am so very grateful. xxx Love to you my friend
Thank you darling and so good to see you here I miss you when I don’t hear from you I hope you are okay my lovely
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Thank you my lovely friend