As lone dogs with timbered bark
Longed for owners return
This, she understands well
The ache of an empty place
Physical or within the folds
Of a secret origami heart
That desire without perfect description
If it would cry out
O moon, let not
One more hour pass
Without feeling the tenderness
Of returning love
And the dogs, small, large, mutt and pedigree
Bay to silver sliver in autumn sky
May hap wishes are stones skimmed
Catching light, as shooting star
Or nothing more
Than harth and home
For wherever you are
That is my destination
I may stand beneath the wide sky alone
Yet it is you I see, with you I belong
My heart goes out to you. This world…
Dogs baying the moon and you beneath the stars waiting. Lovely images.
I feel so resonant with this poem. It is as if it is about my lover and I. Thank you, friend. 🙂
Many of us long for a love that is ours–the can be ours and ours alone. When one finds it, has it, I imagine it’s a beautiful thing:
“Bay to silver sliver in autumn sky
May hap wishes are stones skimmed
Catching light, as shooting star
Or nothing more
Than harth and home
For wherever you are
That is my destination
I may stand beneath the wide sky alone
Yet it is you I see, with you I belong”
A beautiful thing, indeed. Just as the above lines.
Beautiful, both the notion and the imagery created….as always. 😊
Wow the wording is so incredible every.word is heart felt. You are a lovely person keep on thriving life will smile on you.
You paid a heavy price, physically, financially, and emotionally with what you have been through this last year, but it has turned your words into pure gold!!! 🙂 ❤
Beautiful and poignant – and I just love “…within the folds
Of a secret origami heart…”
Very moving poem once again, Candice. ❤️💕
this is a very tender romantic piece. i like it.
Candice, once again I am enthralled with your poetry! You have such a gift with words. Please keep writing as they are absolutely beautiful!!
Natalie said it, I can only echo it 🙂
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Candice Louisa Daquin/The Feathered Sleep
A beautiful ache
Oh moon!!! what secrets would you tell…….. if only you could……. if only
Right?!
yes!